This was a practice writing of Gillian's for standardized testing that all 3rd graders have to take in WV.
I thought it was hilarious and sweet and wanted to share!
Favorite Place in Town
"I really like going to my aunt Holly's house.
They even have a Wii U! I love the new basment they're making. It's supposed to be my great-great- great-great-great gramma, Mimi's new room, I like playing Mario games, and lucky me, they have Mario Kart Wii and Super Mario Bros U. The storage room became a room with books and a board with magnetic letters that came with it. They also have my favorite kind of GaterAid.
My aunt is rich because she bought tons of apps on her iPhone, but she had to delete one. She has tons of lego sets, too.
Sometimes I smell delicious lunch or dinner. And I see my 2-year-old cousin Harry. And the blanket tht's on Harry's bed feels so good, I coulod sleep for hours on that thing!
That's why I love going to Holly's house. "
She got a pretty decent score of 4/6 points on this one. Just needed to elaborate more.
Not bad for a practice run! And Holly's house truly IS Gilly's FAVE place in town!
